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Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Roller Coaster
In the agonizing heat I stand in a queu that seems to never end, waiting for a chance to expirience the thrill. As I see the end of the queu getting ever closer I feel the relief. When I get on the coaster I can feel the fear of the passengers as we enter the unknown, the coaster starts of smoothly like a calm ride but as we head upwards I can feel my heart beeting faster and faster till it sounds like a drum and then....... my heart stops as we rocket downwards, the screaming of both men and women are deafining while my hair is being pulled back like a hand was holding on to it. I can feel my face being forced backwards, my mouth widning and my eye balls flatnig. Then out of nowhere the coaster slows down, I turn around and we're no longer going down hill, with the coaster still moving at high speeds everything around me seems like blur, Ican see ahead of us a turn and as we hit it I can hear the wheels against the metal roaring like a lion while sparks fly. After constant turns I can finaly see the end, I think I'm rielfed but I know I wish it go on for longer and then BANG!!! Out of nowhere my wish comes true and we fall in too a dark steep tunnel. It's impossible to see but after the screaming you can hear the sounds of bats echoing arond the tunnel in the pitch silence. The end is near you can sence it the smell of pure air, the sound of people chating without stop and the bright beam of light of a hot summer day. After the expirience I can't help and say "I want to go again".

Paolo Fiocco

2 comments:

nikaya said...

Whatz Happening Paolo

Dude, your telling a lot in this piece but other than that it was a good piece of writing!!

Well done, BOB
NIKAYA

Alisha said...

Hey Paolo!

Wow! that was really good! I could really feel the image, a couple of spelling errors but well done!

Alisha(Leeshi)